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26 January 2006
Haiku
by Andrew, onboard the Esperanza
Haiku, a traditional Japanese poetry form, is possibly the coolest kind of poem on Earth, and the only kind you will ever catch me writing. But take that with a grain of salt as I find the essence of haiku is not easily grasped, and would be the first to admit my total lack of mastery.None the less, keeping in mind that I do not know what I'm talking about, here are the rules for our haiku contest:
Traditionally a haiku has seventeen syllables, written in three lines: five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables (5-7-5), but this is not an absolute must.
Also each haiku traditionally includes a special "season word" (kigo). This can be "winter" or something subtler - like "pumpkin" for fall. Again, not an absolute requirement. A lot of people skip the kigo these days.
Many good haikus are about the small details of a specific moment.
For our contest, each haiku should be about the ocean, ocean wild life, Antarctica, whaling or some such.
Sample haikus:
An old pond
A frog jumps in -
The sound of water
Basho, Matsuo (1644-1694) - Considered the first great haiku poet.
A whale!
Down it goes, and more and more
up goes its tail!
Buson, Yosa (1716-84) - Followed after Basho, but with his own style.
The whale squirts water
Don't kill the whale he is nice
He likes everyone.
Donny - third grade student
To enter, submit your haiku as a comment to this update. Like all comments on this site, it belongs to you. However, it may also be published in some other place or places - like a Greenpeace magazine or a haiku website (you would be amazed at how many of them there are).
Only haiku comments will be allowed for this update, but you can also leave your name, age and where you live if you want. Be sure to enter a working email address so I can contact you if you win.
Creation of a sublime haiku is reward enough in itself, of course, but I'll also send the winner something from this page (winner's pick, $20 max item price).
The winner will be picked by myself, or whoever else I appoint as my deputy haiku evaluator. Chances of winning may or may not correspond with the quality of your haiku, as my expertise in this area is admittedly dubious.
More about haiku:
I have seen haiku described as, "a conversation with nature". And I have been given the advice to, "aim for simplicity with elegance in expressing the 'haiku moment,' the truth of the original noticing". So I think a good haiku is essentially a humble thing.
A more thorough description of "haikuness" can be found at tinywords.
***Submit your own haiku***
Note: Entering this contest will not put you on any email list or anything like that. I'll only use your email to contact you if you win, or if I have a question about your entry. If you want to receive email updates and be told about ways to help, then please sign up as an Ocean Defender. Contest ends 9th February 2006.
IF YOU POSTED A HAIKU ON THE 2ND OF FEBRUARY, AND YOU CAN'T SEE IT HERE, PLEASE RESUBMIT. WE HAD A SLIGHT TECHNICAL PROBLEM!
UPDATE: I've closed the contest. Thanks for all the haikus! Will announce a winner soon.
Comments
To start it off, here's one from Holly:
Silently it spoke
Invisibly it moved on
It felt like winter
Posted by: Andrew - on board the Esperanza at January 26, 2006 7:37 AM
The ocean is deep
for the whales heart to beat
ban the killing fleet
Posted by: jayne margesson at January 26, 2006 8:15 AM
Andrew down there
took me at my word
invisible summer
Posted by: Giuliano Necchi at January 26, 2006 10:50 AM
Woosh, spin around
There it is!
Tail sinks down deep
Posted by: Kevin Maule at January 26, 2006 11:10 AM
it's breath from ages
the impact just seconds
recorded noises tears causing
Posted by: Sebastian Lindemann at January 26, 2006 1:27 PM
Oh splashing dolphin
leaping majestically
what a nice surprise!
When I was at Nags Head in July 2004 the one morning I was on the beach without my camera was the morning I saw two dolphins playing in the surf. Tons of photos at http://www.planetmike.com/photos/nagshead/ (but no dolphins!)
I am on the beach
It's a beautiful morning
Where is my camera?
Posted by: Michael Clark at January 26, 2006 3:17 PM
Dear Andrew
You must have fallen under the spell of John "boy " Morris ( re the Haiku) but hey thats totally cool by me! I have been thinking for several days that i should write to you folks and tell you that I think you have done the "biz" ( or the "dogs bollocks" as we would say in England) on this campaign. You have achieved more than any campaign that I can remember- my first one was '91. The photography was truely outstanding ( Big thanks to Kate and Jeremy).
I liked the old mans driving up the chuff end of the Nissin Maru. Also a big thanks to everybody who sat through hours of freezing cold & wet in the inflatables- let alone all the harpoons wizzing around. And hey guys - just for dealing with the weather - for all those spilled coffee cups, Upside down toast, ,burst open fridges at 4 in the morning, rolling out of you bunk at night and fighting to stay on the toilet when you are half way through a poo. You have total,utter respect from this quarter.
Here is one for John .....( not Haiku) he gave it to me a long long time ago in antarctica.
There is no wind
Nor does the flag move
It is the heart of man
that is in motion.
I'll get the kids in bed & contemplate some haiku later .
As a committed atheist,humanist and post deist i shall leave you with the Book of psalms 107: 23-24
They that go down to the sea in ships,
that do business in great waters;
These see the works of the lord ,
and his wonders in the deep.
Andrew ,hun, i am not expecting you to put this on the web - but do me a favour - stick it on the crew notice board. Big Hug to each and every one of you and the old man can have two( if he has a shave recently.
Loves
lena
Posted by: Lena at January 26, 2006 6:04 PM
The song of the whales
Inspires life on this planet
Let them live in peace
And another one...
The deep wide ocean
Is better than chocolate
Brings me back to life
I love Haikus!
Posted by: Alina at January 26, 2006 6:38 PM
Sirens
breaths
they are me
I'm then
these magical
singers of the sea
Posted by: Matthew at January 26, 2006 8:01 PM
My four year old son
says he wants to change the world
he's heard the whale's song...
Posted by: Jennifer Cherkasov at January 26, 2006 8:26 PM
Bees gather pollen
Squirrels stash acorns in trees
Whales hide nothing yet live deep
Posted by: Anon at January 26, 2006 8:41 PM
Murdered ocean kings
Bloodied hands of humankind
Let them live in peace
Posted by: Nick Butcher at January 26, 2006 8:52 PM
Cold sea of death
Arrives Greenpeace ships
Saves the sushi
Posted by: Neal at work at January 26, 2006 8:54 PM
I have 2 of them:
Whales, full of splendor
Hunters, why kill the divine?
Antarctica cries
Breathtaking starkness
Frozen exhales sting my face
Sun never ceasing
Posted by: Denise Lytle at January 26, 2006 9:23 PM
I have writen a poem about the recent pursuit of the whaling ships in the artic. If it helps you in any way please use it. we all need to help in any way we can.
in artic waters, deep and blue,
A battle, a chase, a struggle ensues,
To save and protect Minke and Right,
a fight without guns, malice or spite.
After a month of tailing the vessels
That slay these great cretures for portions on tables,
The crusade is could off but not through defeat,
from lack of suplies, fuel and sleep.
Posted by: Ross Inness Mcleish at January 26, 2006 9:25 PM
A whale! A harpoon!
And a spray of cold water
A life is saved
Posted by: DanMyers at January 26, 2006 10:32 PM
I don't deserve the prize 'cause I've seen this elsewhere, but here it is anyway.
Japans whaling fleet
Sets sail for the Antarctic.
This is not science.
Posted by: gillo at January 26, 2006 11:57 PM
Beautiful white ice
Waters turn fallacious red
The research persists
Posted by: Felyne at January 27, 2006 1:53 AM
Stop killing the whales!
It is cruel and quite gruesome
One day we'll regret
They are our brother
One heart beating with our own
The voice of nature
Greed drives this cruel kill
Arrogance and appetite
We must stop this pain
Our heroes witness
Icy waters, blood is spilled
Yet they battle on
People noticing
Greenpeace and Sea Shepherd win
Keeping creatures safe
So, Stop the whale hunts!
Ocean creatures swimming free
Safe from the harpoon
Posted by: Orca at January 27, 2006 2:04 AM
Ocean hunters seize
Whale out against the "meat"
God's creatures swim free!
Posted by: DH at January 27, 2006 2:04 AM
Boat Soldiers in black
Water salt splashes cold
Whales Surface at night
Posted by: DH at January 27, 2006 2:10 AM
Por favor piensen en su familia ellos pagaran las consecuencias de sus actos.Ustedes se iran pero ellos se quedaran a sufrir el resultado de lo que han hecho.
Posted by: Fernanda Marisol Cardenas Rodriguez at January 27, 2006 2:21 AM
Softly the whales are calling
in the mist of morning dawn,
we're an ocean away.
Posted by: Katie at January 27, 2006 4:02 AM
Spring brings the hunter
Endangering whales must end
Who will them protect?
Posted by: Cindy at January 27, 2006 4:57 AM
Surtsey Pods
warmed by lava rock
father and I watch the orca
elders with their young
Posted by: Karyn at January 27, 2006 5:41 AM
Effortless Diver
Antarctica's kin of sea
Beware the Grey Ships
Posted by: nathan at January 27, 2006 10:17 AM
blue sea
blue eyes
blue hvale
blue sky
blue mind....
green hope 27.01.06
Posted by: trond rasmussen at January 27, 2006 11:05 AM
White silence surrounds
solitude; gliding, a leap -
roaring the shot rips.
Posted by: Pavlos at January 27, 2006 3:22 PM
1.
The vast cold sea
Men struggle amongst the waves
Blood red pouring.
2.
The wide toothless maw
Sudden white, draws tears unbidden
The soft white belly.
Posted by: Matty Jones at January 27, 2006 3:45 PM
A minke leaps
A harpoon plunges
Blood, froth and death
Posted by: echo at January 27, 2006 5:53 PM
a beautiful whale
side by side with her lil calf
trajedy strikes them
Posted by: Donna at January 27, 2006 7:22 PM
in the water BLUE
the hunt goes on and on
now the waters RED
Posted by: Donna at January 27, 2006 7:26 PM
Blue are the skies, seas,
Birds flying, whales swimming, safe,
Spring's coming, rejoiced!
Posted by: __earth at January 28, 2006 5:27 AM
Whale seen
In winter shallows
All Hope lost
RIP Thames whale
Posted by: Marine at January 28, 2006 8:51 AM
Writing a haiku
With seventeen syllables
Is very diffic'
Posted by: Emily at January 28, 2006 12:32 PM
Our blue earth
Is in great danger
She needs help
Posted by: ekkaia at January 28, 2006 1:41 PM
Height of God's beauty
The ocean's symbol of pride
Don't let the whales die
Posted by: DanMyers at January 28, 2006 9:02 PM
Magnificient Choice
In The Presence Of Salty Love
Life Is Energy
One more,
Liquid Energy
Surround Me In Your Thoughts
As You Bless All Life
Thank you,
Hal Manogue
PS. My book: Short Sleeves A Book For Friends 2006 Collection, will be available in 3 weeks at shortsleeves.net
Posted by: H.T. Manogue at January 28, 2006 9:17 PM
Whales swimming freely
Endless oceans embracing
Eternal journeys
Posted by: rob stewart at January 28, 2006 11:51 PM
Harpooned Whale Dying
Ocean Shedding Crimson Tears
Stop the Whaling NOW!
Posted by: Irene at January 29, 2006 12:33 AM
Massive mammals swim
Beneath the icy water
Trying to survive
Posted by: Patricia Cooley at January 29, 2006 3:33 AM
Salutations amicales là-bas sur les mers ...
I am from Québec, Canada . As a sea kayaker, I paddle a lot on the ST-LAURENT, often with some good friends of mine ... the whales ! I am also a member of a coalition against exploration and explotation of petroleum and gaz in this area ; we want a moratory on this buiseness but it is very difficult : we just stop them for a few months ... we will need the help of Greenpeace .
If you come down near GASPÉ in Québec, just give me a call so we can do some kayaking together!
By the way I'm sending you my Haïku, in ( French ) :
SOLIDARITÉ
NOUS NOUS DEVONS ENVERS ELLES
NOS SOEURS LES BALEINES
Laurent
Posted by: Laurent Juneau at January 29, 2006 4:22 AM
with the longest days
come the killers and their prey
Stop, we say - but when?
Posted by: Denise at January 29, 2006 12:29 PM
Sun offers long day.
Penguin watch as whale go down,
bows and seems to pray.
Posted by: Stefan at January 30, 2006 2:38 AM
Here's my haiku:
A dolphin here plays
And leaps into the blue sky
As God parts the clouds
i hope i get to win something. that would be cool. either way, haiku rock
Posted by: Tristian at January 30, 2006 4:02 AM
Whales have voices, just like us.
They're killers can't hear them, so who can?
Th heart and soul of a whale bonding man.
Posted by: Daniel Mcleod at January 30, 2006 7:39 AM
Through sun-speckled jets,
great gray forms risen, fallen:
their brief moment gone.
Posted by: Kevin at January 30, 2006 7:42 AM
Andrew on board the/
Esperanza do you fish/
Or merely listen?
Posted by: Peggy at January 30, 2006 9:41 AM
White nights, such long days.
Penguin watches whale go down,
bows and seems to pray.
Posted by: Stefan at January 30, 2006 1:46 PM
haha, haiku, in Malay!
di ufuk sana,
biru laut memikat,
mengejar mimpi.
roughly means,
on the horizon,
the blue ocean calling us,
chasing a dream.
Posted by: __earth at January 30, 2006 8:30 PM
The wind blows harshly
Spume covers the deep red sea -
Dyed by my pal's gore
Posted by: Chris Sydlingen at January 31, 2006 4:08 PM
Beauty of Earth's depth
Raze silent by wanton greed
Kingdoms of man fail
Posted by: Randi Barry at January 31, 2006 5:03 PM
The ice sways
a whale surfaces
gone is the moment
Posted by: Fiona Gogarty at January 31, 2006 5:11 PM
this does sort of rhyme
with what one should be having
a whale of a time
Posted by: Nike at January 31, 2006 5:31 PM
Whale's crying because
more of her sibblings're dying
Oh...capitalism!
Posted by: melissa at January 31, 2006 8:40 PM
"Losing the Monarchy"
Whales - king of the seas
Remember what became of
Weimar Republic?
Posted by: Freya at January 31, 2006 8:57 PM
There she biows
whoosh whale hit
there she goes!
Posted by: Dave at January 31, 2006 11:03 PM
a Deep Blue there stands
life blooms while he spreads his wings
badness within them
Posted by: Ivana at January 31, 2006 11:17 PM
Crimson splashes,
The ocean, brown and wounded.
Foreign Cries and Screams,
No one heard us.
Sharpened Arrow,
Peirced our heavy skin,
Helpless death,
No one will listen.
Soon an echoe of,
where once, we were.
Posted by: Candace at January 31, 2006 11:37 PM
People wait on a cold shore
Evening kissing waves
The rise of a blue grey fin
Posted by: Kim at February 1, 2006 12:39 AM
blue dolphin leaping high
the grey tide scatters
hope stirs in the wise ocean
Kim
Posted by: Kim at February 1, 2006 1:05 AM
whaling must end
this email i must send
our oceans we should defend
Posted by: Henry Stam at February 1, 2006 1:31 AM
A mother and calf ,humpbacks
frozen in the old daguerrotype,
hang matyred in the Cape Brett net.
Posted by: Chris Harrington at February 1, 2006 2:06 AM
A Haiku for everyone-
Hail leviathan!/
suspended in crystal blue,/
get away from the whaling crew
Posted by: Nathan Sidney at February 1, 2006 2:46 AM
here's one for now:
A harpoon cuts the air
blood stains the icy waters
Innocent life is lost.
more later! gotta think...
Posted by: LJ at February 1, 2006 2:57 AM
Splendid gentle whale.
So sad that one-day you may,
Be gone forever.
Posted by: Greg at February 1, 2006 3:00 AM
Vastness of oceans
The sea erupts
A Whale! Nature's greatness
Posted by: sally at February 1, 2006 3:34 AM
Scientific research???
My ass
LEAVE THEM ALONE!
Posted by: sally at February 1, 2006 3:52 AM
the whale, a symbol
of wise strength, love and freedom
let's follow their lead
Whitsunday sailing
Autumn sun, breast feeding son
mother whale feeds calf
the last haiku describes one of my most beautiful "whale moments" ....sitting up on deck feeding my (then) 6 month old, the waters still and clear - sighting a whale resting near the surface of the water - realising that there was a small dark shape resting next to her......thinking "hello sister", I hope that you and your baby are well and happy.......they are not so different from us n'est pas?
Posted by: Kath L-B at February 1, 2006 3:53 AM
Wise eyes reflecting
Cool in the light and water
Images of steel
Posted by: Evelyn at February 1, 2006 3:57 AM
As the last great Whales chant their slaughter
Feel the Earth vibrates , hear the Ocean mourn
See me standing firm by them , steady as i am .
Posted by: matt moscardo-saurat at February 1, 2006 4:22 AM
Here are my two haiku:
All ocean creatures
Have been under siege too long
Must free them from wrong /////
All of marine life
Is now standing on thin ice
See it with your eyes
Posted by: Stéphanie Vandleac at February 1, 2006 5:04 AM
Here, where i stand,
Far from the massacre
That's for sure,
Still, i hear
The call of the wild,
It ecoes in my mind
during the night
It's asking where have
our humanity gone
Posted by: Seiya at February 1, 2006 6:04 AM
the Whalers took my voice but I dont know why they still raise hell
the tide still flashes my black and white skin like a movie projection screen
Posted by: Michael at February 1, 2006 7:01 AM
Echoes of sadness
through dark blue skies of water -
Numb would be silence
Posted by: Paul Waldeck at February 1, 2006 7:43 AM
In the summer of my dreams
there be whales dancing
let's dance over the rainbow.
Posted by: keith w. kunz at February 1, 2006 7:49 AM
the senseless slaughter
majestic ocean creatures
leaves a void on earth
Posted by: Marija Minic at February 1, 2006 9:36 AM
Whales- biggest creatures of the sea
Now available in 1 kilo containers. But,
You have the power to set them free!!!
Posted by: Bhuvana Sharma at February 1, 2006 9:49 AM
there are already so many things to kill...poverty, disease, illiteracy, communalism...
so why kill whales?
Posted by: sudipta narayan das at February 1, 2006 9:57 AM
Hunters out in the sea again.
All the world's sorrow
in an eye of a whale.
Posted by: chavdar at February 1, 2006 10:19 AM
Dive down in the blue
Away from those above you
This is not a game
Posted by: Claire Steele at February 1, 2006 10:45 AM
To the depths it dives
And then . . . The Song
Don't kill The Song
Posted by: Steppenwolf at February 1, 2006 11:26 AM
Title: After The Whale
Barbed harpoons...
Punctured, sliced, vanquished
These peacemakers of the deep
Posted by: Steve Day at February 1, 2006 11:27 AM
Mighty majestic
He knows not what's happening
Winter seems colder
Why do we do this?
Do we kill just for money?
Winter forever
Posted by: Laura at February 1, 2006 12:46 PM
Voice of an angel
The waves smile
Harpoon breaks the spell
Posted by: Krumm at February 1, 2006 1:10 PM
As the last great Whales chant their slaughter
Feel the Earth vibrate , hear the Ocean mourn
See me standing firm by them , steady
Posted by: matt moscardo-saurat at February 1, 2006 1:34 PM
Grounded Emperor
Steward of your precious egg
Winter's endurance
Posted by: Catherine Raymond at February 1, 2006 1:34 PM
Will my children see
what we take for granted now
whales in the sea
Posted by: Khadijeh at February 1, 2006 1:50 PM
the ocean's quiet
the whales are on their way...
to a better winter
Posted by: Deyana at February 1, 2006 2:41 PM
Ancient language voiced
Aquatic lulubies sung
Can you not hear them crying?
Posted by: Heidi at February 1, 2006 2:50 PM
God
save
the
whales...
Posted by: LEHODEY at February 1, 2006 2:57 PM
unheard through the world abyss
winter of the whale
Posted by: Bill at February 1, 2006 3:12 PM
No more whaling!!
Posted by: Paula at February 1, 2006 3:15 PM
The whale in the Thames
We tried in vain to help him
He now helps his friends
Posted by: Wendy at February 1, 2006 3:41 PM
Whales have voices, just like us.
They're killers can't hear them, so who can?
Th heart and soul of a whale bonding man.
Posted by: Nouszerk. at February 1, 2006 3:47 PM
At night in the twilight
when the world is fast asleep
the whale is on the move
until the first light anew
Posted by: KC at February 1, 2006 4:02 PM
No shell like a snail
It should be our holy grail
Everyone - save the whale!
Posted by: Rob Steadman at February 1, 2006 4:25 PM
Déjame sentir tu olor.
Entre el eco de tu voz.
Me estremezco cuando yo te miro.
Cuantas veces hasta hoy cuentan historias de amor, de bellas princesas sumergidas.
Eres tormento, eres sustento, por ti muero y vivo.
Con tu rumor nos hablas, tu gemido es el de un niño.
Quiero ser parte de ti, de tu universo sin fin, muestrame tu corazon!!!
Posted by: Esperanza Martinez at February 1, 2006 4:48 PM
please! help us!
our life is unique! if we have a hope, we will have all! don´t kill just for money!
Posted by: Mayra at February 1, 2006 4:57 PM
The docile giant
Should be spared a harpoon fate
In peace he shall live
Posted by: Tiff at February 1, 2006 5:10 PM
the whale swims out
to the sea water it goes
where to? no-one knows
Posted by: Ramesh Ram at February 1, 2006 5:17 PM
Ocean's mighty king
Brutally murdered by man
Deep blue you won't see
For your flesh so magical
Says the crime perpetrator
Behind tradition he hides
In your marine realm
You became a vulgar pray
Hunted down like Moby Dick
Man took your freedom
Because that's what he is good at
Taking, killing, winning....
Posted by: paul at February 1, 2006 5:26 PM
We need
a whale
to swim to Tokyo!
Posted by: Marilynn Block at February 1, 2006 5:43 PM
Hunters at the sea again.
All the world's sorrow
in an eye of a whale.
Posted by: chavdar at February 1, 2006 5:59 PM
Whispers in the dark
The sorrowful song of wales
Now silenced by man:-(
Posted by: Danni at February 1, 2006 6:03 PM
Gentle sea giant
Ancient soul and nature's friend
We will help you sing
Posted by: Mary Terese Hammond at February 1, 2006 6:05 PM
A liquid firework,
a small white horse,
cold water, cold metal, cold man.
Posted by: Si at February 1, 2006 6:05 PM
They dwell in the sea
Its were they forever belong
Let them be.
Posted by: Sarah Mostafa at February 1, 2006 6:27 PM
Whales dawn chorus herd
A song on the oceans breath
Silence strikes with spears
Posted by: ruth at February 1, 2006 6:31 PM
hoshigarimasen
katsumadewa
we want nothing till we win
__________________
sentience in the dark
cool embrace of the ocean
when will we know them?
_________________________
eat eat hungry ape
think thee not of all thee rape
eat whilst thee still can
Posted by: GNash at February 1, 2006 6:38 PM
my ocean size friend
do not discriminate him
because of his skin
Posted by: Michelle at February 1, 2006 6:40 PM
A big whale
is jumping in the ocean
I love whales.
Posted by: sabbbr at February 1, 2006 6:41 PM
Humpback Whales in the sunset
red water all around
the Ocean is singing
my dreams flying with them
Posted by: Lara at February 1, 2006 7:21 PM
No fish, bowl is hungry,
No whales, ocean is lonely,
No death, executive pocket is empty.
Posted by: Sophie at February 1, 2006 7:35 PM
Snow on the surface
Her spirit warms the deep sea
Swim freely, blue whale
Posted by: Paula at February 1, 2006 7:39 PM
Where the whale is found
Carcass hanging from a ship
The world is watching
My first haiku. It is inspired by a photo I saw of a dead whale being hauled up onto the back of a ship. What a waste of a magnificent creature.
Posted by: John Sheppard at February 1, 2006 8:19 PM
Beautiful creature,
Swim gracefully from cold minds,
Who kill for money.
Posted by: john nellen at February 1, 2006 8:38 PM
Beautiful are they
Stop them from dying in vain
Let their tails swim free
Posted by: Rachel at February 1, 2006 8:47 PM
calf sinks under ice
mother nudges the child up
life seeps from a wound
man with heavy heart
his father taught him to hunt
he teaches his son
witness death with rage
draw a line and say no more
not all people wait
stillness then a splash!
gulls cry eager for for food
whales return with joy
Posted by: adam at February 1, 2006 9:12 PM
as the ice all melts
we will soon be with the whales
don't upset them now
Posted by: Corinne at February 1, 2006 10:28 PM
Bright shiny red
stains the vulnerable sea
my heart cries
Posted by: Tara at February 1, 2006 10:29 PM
Azure water clear
Creatures evading textbooks
Caught in a blind net
Posted by: stacy at February 1, 2006 10:40 PM
Azure water clear
Creatures evading textbooks
Caught in a blind net
Posted by: stacy at February 1, 2006 10:43 PM
Salty spray flying
Mighty tail slaps raging sea
But not strong enough
Posted by: stacy at February 1, 2006 10:45 PM
Fin above diamonds
Cutting through water's surface
Curiosity
Posted by: stacy at February 1, 2006 10:46 PM
I'm a member of a Greenpeace student organization at the University of Miami and I thought this contest sounded fun, so I had our group come up with a couple Haikus as an ice breaker game. It was lots of fun and here's what we came up with....
Coral reefs are neat
very colorful and bright
we should save them now
We love big mammals
majestic in the big blue
let them swim freely
Now I'd like to think we could be Haiku masters, but others may not agree. But it was a fun activity and got us thinking about the oceans! Thanks!
Posted by: Emily at February 1, 2006 11:15 PM
Whaling Harpoon Cold
Blood Drips to Stain Human Kind
As Brutal Killers
Posted by: Katharine at February 1, 2006 11:19 PM
Giant creatures are
Greedily speared, say goodbye
To another whale
Posted by: Mackenzie Reiss at February 2, 2006 2:25 AM
sailing into
the red sunset
I watch tv
Posted by: John at February 2, 2006 8:06 AM
In the deep,
there goes the,
king of blues!!
Posted by: Ashvini at February 2, 2006 9:07 AM
Mother whale and calf/
Compassionate? All sorrow/
Lifts in icy air/
Posted by: TakakaGirl at February 2, 2006 9:51 AM
Lord of the cold sea
Death strikes in his silver flank
sea is scarlet blood
Posted by: Fiona Cresswell at February 2, 2006 11:42 AM
Lord of the cold sea
Death strikes in his silver flank
sea is scarlet blood
(wrong email address last time)
Posted by: Fiona Cresswell at February 2, 2006 11:43 AM
Up from the deep blue
Soars a natural legend
Living to charm men
Posted by: DoN at February 2, 2006 12:50 PM
Another whale dies
What a cost
Humanities loss
Posted by: keith richardson at February 2, 2006 1:30 PM
I swim a drop's calm
I'm a whale..I'm a man..I..
I am...I am life
Posted by: alina at February 2, 2006 2:30 PM
Swim on friend, swim on
for those that can't, for those,
on plates in Japan
Posted by: Kate at February 2, 2006 4:58 PM
Antarctic sunrise
Spring droplets cast a ripple
Oh! I am alive
Posted by: John at February 2, 2006 5:49 PM
Majestic marine/
serene water-spirit glides/
singing his sad song.
Posted by: Emily Balon at February 2, 2006 11:50 PM
Down in the blue oceans deep
The gentle Whale swims peacefully
On crashing waves above, the sea gulls shriek is not heard.
Man hunts in metal boats with cruel intent
As the sea runs red with murder
The world does nothing but look the other way.
Shed a tear for the whale, for what is next?
Posted by: Andrew Dowell at February 3, 2006 1:02 AM
Ocean deep and strong
Holds the whale in her embrace
Like a proud mother
Posted by: Elspeth Duncan at February 3, 2006 1:36 AM
We call her mother
Man and whale share her- one earth
Embrace your brothers
Posted by: Kelly at February 3, 2006 2:02 AM
Nature created great life, in all shapes and sizes.
Millions of years of evolution it took to create great and old species like whales...
Beauty and perfection for our own eyes to enjoy and admire?
or prey for our own to kill and consume?
Posted by: Xavier van Halen at February 3, 2006 2:50 AM
IF YOU POSTED A HAIKU ON THE 2ND OF FEBRUARY, AND YOU CAN'T SEE IT HERE, PLEASE RESUBMIT. WE HAD A SLIGHT TECHNICAL PROBLEM!
Posted by: Adele at February 3, 2006 3:00 AM
Great blue friend of mine
I apologize for man
For those who murder
Posted by: Ashley at February 3, 2006 3:22 AM
stop whaleing......
more and more children and their parents love our earth,love everybody in the earth.
Posted by: lily wang at February 3, 2006 5:20 AM
Apathy - - bloodlust
Hunt the ocean Goliaths
Who then shall rescue?
Posted by: Kevin Armstrong at February 3, 2006 6:14 AM
Many english Haiku writers believe that english Haiku can convey the meaning in 3-5-3 that would need 5-7-5 in Japanese characters. I have written some of both...one is for Lally
Morning hunt
Ice flows from heart not
Antartic
Eyes that crave
Blind to spring flowers
Deep inside
Summer sun
White nights made so dark
Foolish men
Factory ship
Vomits blood and tears
Predator
Oceans grace
Cold steel slices air
Violent death
November
Minke families swim
Quick! Danger!
Ah! Rebith:
Japanese hunter
Born as whale?
Money in purse
Can't wash out Kamma
Blood that stains.
"Harvesting" -
Killing, stealing, murderous hunt.
Shame on you
Sweet Mysticeti
Meditating in the ice
Deep ocen mystery
Minke, Fin, Sei, Blue,
Humpback, Pigmy, Bowhead, Right,
Protect you we will
Blue you were once king
Two hundred thousand of you
Ocean genocide
Joy when you pass by
Balaenopteriae!
Your song lifts our hearts
Now they play safely
Eubalaena Australis
ocean stars on postcards!
and lastly for Lally and all the crews:
My Baleen so huge
To swallow up all your love
Minke song of thanks
Posted by: padma at February 3, 2006 6:38 AM
Kangaroo Island
Seals relax in summer sand
the joy of freedom
White ice and silence
Each moment holds a new hope
A safe home for whales
Orca's call
The Minke listens
Run whale run!
(NB would playng orca calls into the water next to whaling ships chase away whales in danger???)
Nissui and Sealord
Selling us tins of sorrow
Don't buy into that!
Posted by: padma at February 3, 2006 7:03 AM
Cascading blue fires
Lick the ashes of kindess
In a sea now torn
Posted by: Megan Sebben at February 3, 2006 7:11 AM
Magnificence lost
From logic like a drowned fish
As we rob ourselves
Posted by: Freya at February 3, 2006 7:37 AM
La Megattera
Echi dall'abisso e suoni come canti
Soffi nell'aria,richiami come pianti
Scrosci d'argento sulla superficie
sul dorso lunga e stretta ha una cicatrice
Davvero Voi Insensati volete far la guerra
all'Immagine di Dio
su questa Terra?
Posted by: Lara at February 3, 2006 10:10 AM
My Haiku -
Leave us alone please
Why? For we do you no harm
Learn to share our world.
Posted by: Sarah at February 3, 2006 12:31 PM
Ocean mammals sing
A conversation with nature
-We commit murder
Unfathomable-
Mother nature, hear her howl
Whales need living too
Posted by: Timothy James McCarthy at February 3, 2006 3:33 PM
salti gioiosi
bolle d'aria macchiate
da un freddo arpione
Posted by: marco at February 3, 2006 8:08 PM
Now is the winter-
The whale eating murder
Of our discontent
Posted by: Timothy James McCarthy at February 4, 2006 1:51 AM
Blue Ocean
Deep and vast
Home of the soul
Posted by: lisa Marshall at February 4, 2006 9:56 AM
Vast icy water
A minke whale surfacing
Breaking Sunlight
Posted by: Wiebke Lotz at February 4, 2006 11:10 AM
Watching the Whales
One is shot down, a deep cut
Who will help it up?
Posted by: Fleur Martin at February 4, 2006 12:50 PM
Desolate expanse
Wasted life watching wasteland
Grandpa saw one once
Posted by: smoky bear at February 4, 2006 5:04 PM
Hear a puff of air
Great singers of the ocean
Don't stop their songs
Majestic singer
Monsters of greed and metal
Halt its haunting song
Posted by: Rebecca at February 4, 2006 6:52 PM
Oceans painted red
Empty waters reflecting
The sea in the sky.
Posted by: poppy at February 4, 2006 9:01 PM
We need air to breathe and food to eat,
He does too
We know love and we know hurt,
He does too
We have a warm heart
He has one, too
So we are alive...
He is too!
Posted by: Phuc at February 5, 2006 5:14 AM
Pitiless ice storm,
Seaweed swaddled otters float
Despite the pelting.
Posted by: Ellen Jackson at February 5, 2006 7:25 AM
Underneath the waves
A whale sails like a spaceship
Over mountain tops.
Posted by: Ellen Jackson at February 5, 2006 7:34 AM
Weeping for the beast
Who knows secrets of the sea
He belongs only there
Posted by: Eva at February 5, 2006 12:27 PM
Spirits of the sea
Swimming majestically
Why can't they be free
Posted by: M.Dowell at February 5, 2006 1:08 PM
Cold winter's waters
Against their smooth muscled skin
Dive to your freedom
Posted by: M.Dowell at February 5, 2006 1:15 PM
Moonlight shines on high
On Arctic's feezing waters
Free the whales forever
Posted by: M.Dowell at February 5, 2006 1:29 PM
Water engulfs him,
His ethereal song sounds.
Soul of innocence.
------
Blue swirls like a veil.
Winter waters caress her.
Mother of the sea.
------
Too kind for words: whale.
Protector of the weak: whale.
Mother of seas: whale.
Posted by: Sarah at February 5, 2006 3:16 PM
I see crimson blood
In the summer of my Life
Whales weep in my Heart
Posted by: Alex at February 5, 2006 6:20 PM
Wait the whales' songs
while the strongs
sleeping in the pound.
Posted by: Rafael García at February 5, 2006 8:01 PM
Ay, mare.
Ay, maresita.
¿Por qué canta,
canta la ballenita?
Canta que llora,
que está llorando.
Y lágrimas saladas,
va derramando.
¿Qué pena, mare?
Ay, maresita.
¿Qué pena tiene, mare,
la más bonita?
Pena que pena
que es la penita.
La última,
la última ballenita.
Posted by: Rafael at February 5, 2006 8:16 PM
Son of Samurai
Don't look with an evil eye
Let whales never die
Posted by: seydo demirtaş at February 5, 2006 11:02 PM
Swift shapes agliding
blow after leap after blow
Southern summer's joy
White summer abounds
shadowing the waters
the whaling fleet draws near
Posted by: Janne at February 6, 2006 9:14 PM
Whale song sounds
stranded she sings an mneonic
melody for man
Posted by: Raven at February 6, 2006 10:38 PM
Innocent Creature
Great, peaceful beast of the Sea
Protect and love them
and
Winter Gray Male Whale
No fears in the World except
The Nature of Man
Posted by: LL at February 6, 2006 10:42 PM
Stranded Pilot Whale
Worried eyes touch deep - I help
Two souls connecting
Posted by: Angelika at February 7, 2006 12:52 AM
Crystal Blue
Grace it holds
Grey Soul of the Deep
Posted by: Anuna at February 7, 2006 1:30 AM
My silver lining
of shields and swords defending
my sea I protect
Posted by: charity at February 7, 2006 3:01 AM
Lured whale dives deep
hooking Earth's heartbeat, to rise
echoing her song.
Posted by: Indigo at February 7, 2006 5:15 AM
Earth turns to greet moon
Sun's night beacon lights the sea
Glimmering black fins
Earth turns to greet sun
Red clouds gather on the sea
Tears for the hunted
Posted by: padma at February 7, 2006 7:36 AM
...
the great ocean mourns
the last whales chant their slaughter
lets stand firm by them
...
Posted by: matt moscardo-saurat at February 7, 2006 11:02 PM
Pumpkins in spring,
Brings costal shores abound,
Future breeding grounds..
Posted by: elans at February 8, 2006 12:25 AM
Be a whale
Be a human
be alive
Posted by: David at February 8, 2006 10:46 AM
whales whales whales!!!!
when it live it create a melody in the ocean
melody that make the ocean sleep in peace
when it die it make the ocean crying like they lost their king
please please dont kill them dont let them die!!!
Posted by: yeremia pohan at February 8, 2006 7:50 PM
The ocean goes up
The mighty blue whale goes down
Trust only Bob Brown!
Posted by: martin at February 9, 2006 2:22 AM
winter morning
a whale's song
in each ocean heart
Posted by: Darrell Lindsey at February 9, 2006 5:24 AM
ship at dawn
a whale's song
in each ocean heart
Posted by: Darrell Lindsey at February 9, 2006 5:38 AM
Blue ocean envelopes the giant diving deep
to escape the harsh world of men,
the harpoon and grenade.
Posted by: Vivienne Choudhury at February 9, 2006 3:10 PM
When the whales die
A piece of my heart sinks too
And I cannot help but cry
Posted by: Kieron Barnes at February 9, 2006 11:46 PM
deep under water
devestation caused
by the human terror
death we do witness
red clouds amoungst blue beauty
this is our doing
death we must stop
stand as one and sing for love
together we are an ocean
Posted by: Kerry B at February 10, 2006 12:14 AM
The whale cannot sense
Blocked by ships and humans
The tools of his demise
Posted by: Tiffany Li at February 10, 2006 2:56 AM
CONTEST IS CLOSED.
Thanks for all the great poetry.
Posted by: Andrew - on board the Esperanza at February 10, 2006 8:53 AM
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